Thursday, August 29, 2013

Day 4 - Thursday, August 29, 2013

Class Work

1. Meet the EMCC Writing Rubric! If you still have the paper copy with you that was handed out on Day 1 of class, please take it out now. If you need a new copy - let me know.

2. For homework you were to write Draft 2 of your object essay. Add the narration - the story. Let the reader see the object in action with YOU. Post the draft to Canvas by the beginning of class on Thursday. ALSO, bring a paper copy. Do not toss DRAFT 1. I will want both drafts attached to your final copy later next week. I want to see the growth.

3. . Please take out that paper copy OR find it on Canvas OR use your jump-drive or e-mail attachment to call it up on the computer.
  • You may stay at your table as long as there are three other people there with you. If you are at a table with a total number of folks other than four, you need to move. In other words, you need to be in groups of FOUR!
  • Once you have your paper visible and are part of a group of 4, move one chair to your left. You are now Reader #1 for this activity .  You are reading for CONTENT. Sign your name by "Content." As you read, you will focus on the subject matter, focus issues, and support issues. The object should be described in such a way that you can visualize it. There should be a "story" element that explains how the object came into the possession of the writer, something the writer has done with the object, or what the writer predicts might happen with the object in the future. The story should be clear and leave you, the reader, with NO questions!
  • Now, move one more chair to the left. You are Reader #2 for this part of the activity. Sign your name by "Clarity." You are looking for strong organization and sentences that are in standard English. Word choice matters along with paragraphing. The order of the paper should make sense.
  • Move one more chair to your left. You are now Reader #3 for the final part of the activity. Put your name by "Editing." You will be checking for correct formatting. In this instance, you should see evidence of paragraphs. You may skip the "Citation Issues" as no research was required. DO pay careful attention to the "Mechanics Issues" or GUM stuff - Grammar, Usage, and Mechanics. If you see a sentence in need of additional punctuation help, please help! You may write on paper copies or highlight on electronic copies.
  • Move one more chair to your left and take a look at the comments. Use these to guide your final revision. The final copy is due in CANVAS by the beginning of class on Tuesday. Bring the paper drafts along with the rubric to class to turn in. I want to see the growth of this essay.

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"The Blank Notebook"- Sample Essay - handout from Southern Living magazine.

1. How do you feel when you come to be the owner of a blank notebook? Perhaps you purchased it yourself. Maybe you remember a time when your family gave you one so that you would be ready for school. For two minutes, respond to the term: NOTEBOOK.

2. Now see how Rick Bragg, a Pultzer Prize-winning author writes about his notebook!
3. As you read, highlight specific details. These might include sensory images: sight, sound, touch, taste, and/or smell.
4. Does the author like or dislike the notebook? What words, phrases, and/or examples let you know?

As you move into the third and final draft of your object essay, take some tips from Mr. Bragg. Clearly let the reader know how you feel about your object.

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Return of the FANBOYS - also, meet the SNOBS - better know as Conjunctive Adverbs! And then there is the mighty semi-colon - the "Superman or Wonder Woman of the punctuation world. The semi-colon is strong enough to hold two independent clauses together without help!



http://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/ConjAdv.html

Like the FANBOYS, Conjunctive Adverbs are able to connect two independent clauses - sentences. However, conjunctive adverbs need help. Enter the semi-colon and the comma!

Let's see how all of these work.

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/powerpoint.htm

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Homework

A. Draft #3 is due by the beginning of class on Tuesday. See The information above.

B. Practice punctuation compound sentences. (Handout - bring it back with corrections! Remember, there is more than one correct answer.


C. Think about something you know how to do and could teach others to do. Have an idea for Tuesday when we will begin a process paper.







Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Day 3 - Tuesday, all day long!

Class Work (Homework is in GREEN!)

1. Please give me your mind-map! It was part of the essay about you.
2. Let's look at a couple of the group description from Thursday . . .
3. Peer editing activity: 
  • Either have a paper copy of your "object" description, or call it up on the computer screen.
  • You were to describe the object in detail. This included sight, sound, touch, taste, and smell as appropriate.
  • You need ONE partner for this activity.
    • Show the object of the picture of the object to your partners. The tallest person in the pair goes first.
    • Then, with both of you looking at the paper, read your description to your partner. Do not stop, just read.
    • Partner - LISTEN.
    • Reader - read the paper again. This time, stop at the end of each sentence and ask the listener if there are any questions. You are looking for additional information that you could add to your description. What did you miss?
    • Listener - DO ask questions. For example, if you partner has written that the object is "kind of small," ask for specifics. Is it two inches long? Does is weigh less than an ounce? Can it be compared to something else that is that size? ASK! Note the questions.
    • Then, switch roles. If you were the reader, you are now the listener. If you were the listener, you are now the reader. Follow the steps described above.
    • Please sign your partner's paper and note that you were the listener.
4. Once the editing activity is over, be sure to get your paper and the questions back. If it is on the screen, be sure to save the questions and your partner's signature.

5. As a class, let's look at a professional writer's description of a notebook. Silently read the essay to yourself. Underline or high-light at least three examples of strong and specific description. Write your favorite line of description on a post-it and stick it to the board along the "line." These are the most powerful lines in the paper! Let's see if we agree.

6. Class discussion:
  • How is this essay different from your object description?
  • How is it similar? What are the commonalities?
  • What do you need to add to your essay to make it more powerful?
7. What you have is an idea for a better paper. Now, add the story. Put yourself into it. After all, it is your object! You can tell how you came to own the object. Perhaps you can tell the story of a time when the object came in handy. You could speculate how your life would change if you did not own the object.

8. For HOMEWORK, write Draft 2 of your object essay. Add the narration - the story. Let the reader see the object in action with YOU. Post the draft to Canvas by the beginning of class on Thursday. ALSO, bring a paper copy. Do not toss DRAFT 1. I will want both drafts attached to your final copy later next week. I want to see the growth.

9. Grammar moment:  Let's meet the FANBOYS!
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/conjunctions.htm
http://www.grammar-quizzes.com/8-3punc.html
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/powerpoint.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quiz_list.htm See #s 73, 74, 75, 76, 77. Practice any two with a partner. Practice two others for homework.

Thursday, August 22, 2013

Welcome to Thursday - Day 2

Class Work & Homework

1. Go to the board in the back of the room and write the topic  you selected and your name.
  • We will do this by tables. If you see your topic already listed, write your name by that topic.
  • After all are finished, you will be grouped by topic for map sharing and a brief discussion.
  • If nobody else selected your topic, you will be grouped by topics that are similar in some way. (We might need to get creative here!)
2. Discussion ideas:
  • Take a look at each others' maps. What commonalities do the maps possess?
  • What are the differences?
  • What is the story?
3. After discussing, feel free to add to your map if you want to.

4. You will be using the map to guide the writing of your first one-page narrative. The draft is due Tuesday. Submit in Canvas AND bring a paper copy to class.  See #9.

5. Speaking of narratives, let's discover what one must do in writing to come up with a narrative!

Complete the following - A narrative is...

6. Now take a look at some tips for things to include in your narrative.
http://teachers.sduhsd.k12.ca.us/kburke/tips_for_writing_a_personal_narr.htm

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/narrative.htm (Sample narrative)

6. Getting to know you as a writer...papers returned...
  • Individual comments appear on each paper. This was a pass/fail activity. You passed!
  • The most common problems were:
    • Elaboration
    • Specific examples (Narrative in this case . . .There were few stories!)
7. Let's practice elaboration. Each table will be given a short, generic sentence. Your assignment is to work with the group and come up with a strong narrative! Assign one person to be the scribe and type your group's final narration. E-mail it to me so that we can look at it on the screen. Also, assign a reader.

Whole class sentence - practice together: The child went to the window.
Step 1: What questions come to mind? What details do you, the reader, need to know?
Step 2: Now, rewrite and answer the questions. You will end up with MANY sentences!
Step 3: It is time to open the envelope and see what your table will be describing in narrative form.

8. Group Sharing

9. Your homework is to write the narrative draft. Look back at Day 1 for the instructions. The instructions also appear on Canvas. Post by the beginning of class on Tuesday, August 27, 2013

10. Additional homework: Find an object to describe in minute detail. This can be something that is a favorite of yours, or it can be an interesting piece of junk that you just found!
  • Concentrate on the details. Pretend you are the camera and must "show me" with your words what the object it. Concentrate on the use of the five senses: sight, sound, touch, taste, and smell. Right now, just describe the object. Post to Canvas AND bring the object or a picture of the object and a paper copy of the description to class. Write in sentences. A bulleted list is NOT acceptable! (Due: Tuesday, August 27, 2013)



Monday, August 19, 2013

First Day of School!

Welcome to English 091.

Class Work

1. Introductions . . . select three questions from the sheet to use when introducing yourself!

2. Syllabus review . . . see post #1. The syllabus also appears on Canvas.

3. "Sometimes the hardest part of writing is just getting started." (Beth Baruch Joselow)

For two minutes, take a look at one of the quotation sites listed. Locate a quotation that describes your feelings about writing. Prepare to share with the class.

http://www.quotationspage.com/subjects/writing/
http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/keywords/writing.html

You will be using this to write a one page essay about your life as a writer. What is your best writing experience? What is your worst? What are your biggest challenges? What are you good at when it comes to writing? What are your goals for this course? These are just a few of the questions to consider when writing your draft. This is a quick-write. You have 10 minutes to tell me a bit about you as a writer. (10 pts.)
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4. Let's review the EMCC Writing Rubric... (Handout) The rubric will be used to evaluate your writing. By the end of the course, you should be able to earn 3 or 4 in all categories.

5. Quick writing and free writing...
I need to get to know you as a writer. The best way for that to happen is for you to write for me. Let's get started.

Before jumping in, many writers brainstorm or complete a bubble-map or brain map of some sort. Let's give it a try. Share your map with the others at your table.

Samples:
http://search.yahoo.com/search;_ylt=AsV5M5fHv6NgYDXxUG3EqdibvZx4?p=mind+mapping&toggle=1&cop=mss&ei=UTF-8&fr=yfp-t-900

Yours does not have to be this fancy, but you do have to make one and submit it on Thursday.

Here are some possible topics. Pick one from this list and write a one-page narrative. You are in the story, so 1st person point of view is fine. Try to create the where, when, why, and how of the story. Include dialogue is any was used in the actual event.

Compose your draft on the computer. It makes editing and revising easier later. Bring a paper copy to class on Thursday.
  • popcorn
  • pencil
  • swimming
  • desert
  • ocean
  • fire fly
  • stars
  • gold fish
  • dog
  • cat
  • hat
  • sport
  • flower
  • holiday
  • music
  • movie
  • television
  • video game
  • phone
  • friend
  • brother/sister
  • parent
  • game
  • shoes
  • color
  • computer
  • diamond
  • health
  • exercise
  • dinner
  • soda
  • time
  • childhood
  • old age
  • If you think of something else, feel free to use it as your springboard for writing.
Once you have finished the mind map, write a draft. The draft is not due until next Tuesday.

Course Syllabus


Syllabus English 091 Section 0020-28413

Aug. 20-Dec. 13, 2013 – Tu/Th   1:00-2:15 – Estrella Hall Learning Studio N244

MC900287262[1] 

ESTRELLA MOUNTAIN COMMUNITY COLLEGE
Fundamentals of Writing - Instructor: Mrs. Patricia Eaton

E-mail: patricia.eaton@estrellamountain.edu  If you have questions, contact me via e-mail. I will check the e-mail daily during the week and respond. Please check the blog before asking me for information about a missed class.

Blog:  www.eatonenglish091.blogspot.com       Note: The blog is your link to what is happening in class and to what is due. Links to readings are also posted on the blog.

 

Adjunct Office: 623-935-8139 - Montezuma Hall 119 (You may phone the office and leave a message for me between 8:00 am and 5:00 pm on weekdays.

 

Required Text:

 

None – you will access readings on-line. Check the blog for daily assingments.

 

Computer Access: You will need regular access to a computer with reliable Internet access. If you do not have access at home, please use the EMCC computers in Estrella Hall’s Information Commons.. Most homework assignments and essays will be submitted on Compass. You cannot complete this class without using a computer with Internet access. If you are new to the use of computers or need help, ,just ask. We were all new users at one time!

 

USB Drive: You need a USB drive for this course. If you already have one and space is available, you may use it. A new one is not required. You will want to save all work on your jump drive and bring the jump drive to class.

 

Note: This syllabus is subject to change based upon the progress of the class. Daily updates will be provided on the blog. If you miss a class, be sure to contact me and ask for a copy of the daily information. Also, be sure to check the blog for updates and links to required readings.

 

Office Hours: By appointment – my schedule is flexible.

Course Summary

This course places an emphasis on preparation for college-level composition with a focus on organizational skills. You will develop effective writing strategies through five or more writing projects.

Prerequisites: Appropriate writing placement test score or a grade of C or better in ENG081 or ESL 087 or permission of the Department or Division.

Course Competencies

1.       Recognize how rhetorical contexts (including circumstance, purpose, topic, audience, and writer) affect writing.

2.       Organize writing to support a central idea through unity, coherence, and logical development.

3.       Use conventions in writing complete sentences, using appropriate grammar, and using proper mechanics.

4.       Use convention in writing, including consistent voice, tone, and diction.

5.       Generate and support effective and appropriate ideas.

6.       Integrate a variety of sentence types.

7.       Recognize and implement steps in the writing process for paragraphs and multi-paragraph projects, including prewriting, drafting, and editing for unity and coherence.

8.       Use feedback obtained from peer review, instructor comments and/or other resources to revise writing.

9.       Assess one’s own writing strengths and identify strategies for improvement through instructor conference, portfolio review, written evaluation, and/or other methods.

10.    Generate, format, edit, and deliver writing using appropriate technology.

Each week you will have lessons on grammar, usage, and mechanics. (GUM) In addition, you will learn about the writing process and put what you learn into practice. Peer editing is an important step in the writing process. You are expected to participate in all peer editing activities. You will also participate in class discussions. Readings will be assigned. You need to complete all readings and assignments related to those readings.

Major Writing Projects

1.       Description

2.       Narration

3.       Definition

4.       Summary

5.       Classification

In addition to these major projects, there will be numerous shorter writing activities designed to help you develop specific skills. All writing assignments, including the short ones, are important and will help you strengthen your writing skills.

You will also learn the basics of crediting your sources in MLA format.

Attendance Policy: Active participation is expected for successful completion in this course. In the event of an absence, students are expected to contact me by e-mail: Patricia.Eaton@estrellamountain.edu and go to www.eatonenglish91.blogspot.com for daily updates for the course.

Important FYI:

Attendance policy (typically, students are allowed the number of unofficial absences according to the number of times a class meets per week; ex: TR, students are allowed two unofficial absences and may be dropped after that.) Students must sign the attendance sheet for each class to be counted as present.

 

 

2.3.2 Attendance

  • Only persons who are registered for a class at any of the Maricopa Community Colleges may attend that class. Attendance requirements are determined by the course instructor. Students who do not meet the attendance requirement as determined by the course instructor may be withdrawn.
  • Students who fail to attend the first scheduled class meeting, or to contact the instructor regarding absence before the first scheduled class meeting may, at the option of the instructor, be withdrawn.
  • At the beginning of each course, each faculty member will provide students with written attendance requirements. It is the student's responsibility to consult with the instructor regarding official or unofficial absences. Absences begin to accumulate with the first scheduled class meeting.
  • Students bear the responsibility of notifying the Admissions and Records Office/Office of Student Enrollment Services when they discontinue studies in a course or studies at the college. 

Official absences are those that occur when students are involved in an official activity of the college. Absences for those events are not counted against the number of allowed absences. Make-up work is required. Documentation is required.

Jury duty and subpoenas will not be counted against the number of allowed absences. Documentation is required. Make-up work is required.

Military commitments for up to one week will not counted against the number of allowed absences. If the length of the assignment is more than one week, the student and instructor will determine if it will be possible to make up the work missed. If the length of absence creates an undue hardship on the student’s ability to make up assignments, he or she will be given an opportunity to request an incomplete grade or be allowed to drop the class. Appropriate documentation is required. Make-up work is required.

In the event of the death of an immediate family member, absences for periods of up to one week will not be counted against the number of absences allowed by the instructor or department. Students should contact the instructor as soon as possible to arrange for make-up work. Appropriate documentation is required. Make-­­­­­up work is required.

Students have the right to observe major religious holidays without penalty. Absences for such holidays do not count against the number of absences allowed by the instructor. At least one week before the holiday, students must submit a written statement that includes both the date of the holiday and the reason why class attendance is impossible. Prior arrangements must be made with each instructor for make-up work. If prior arrangements have been made, the student will not be penalized.

Late Work:

Students are expected to complete any homework for the missed day by the next class period.

Make-ups of in-class writing assignments are at the instructor’s discretion. Students turning their work in after the due date may be penalized by having the grade lowered five points per day in fairness to those students who met the deadline.

Tape Recordings and/or Video Recordings: In order to tape any class session, a student must first seek permission from the instructor. In order to tape group discussions, permission must be given by the instructor and the students in the group.

Cell Phones: Cell phones must be turned off or placed on “vibrate” during class. At no time should a student be sending text messages, sending e-mails, listening to music, surfing the web, visiting Facebook, playing games, or carrying on conversations. In the event of an emergency call, please excuse yourself from the room, take care of the situation, and quietly return to class. Otherwise, ignore your phone!

Computers, Tablets, and IPods: Class time is just that – time to complete the tasks of the class. Refrain from surfing the web, visiting Facebook, playing games, sending e-mails, completing homework for other classes, or listening to music. If you are using the device for something other than class assignments, you are disrupting the class. Please be respectful of your classmates, your instructor, and yourself.

Student Disabilities: If you are student with a disability that requires special accommodations, please let me know as soon as possible. “Students with disabilities are encouraged to contact the DRS office at the beginning of the admissions process to discuss accommodation needs and to request an alternate format of printed materials. Some accommodations may require three to four weeks notification. For more information, call 623-935-8935, or contact the EMCC DRS office in Komatke Hall 119, or e-mail: Ramona.shingler@emcmail.maricopa.edu.”

Student Support Services: For writing assistance in the Learning Enhancement Center, students should contact the Writing Center at 623-935-8419. The Writing Center is located on the first floor of Estrella Hall.

Grading Scale:

·         Five one-page essays – 20 points each – total 100 possible points

·         Three essays - each counts as 100 points. I use the EMCC Writing Rubric. We will review this in class.

·         Up to 20 short GUM assignments – each counts 10 points (200 points possible)

·         Exam essay -. Note that all students must attend class on the day of the exam. This is an EMCC policy.

·         Class participation = 100 points – This includes attendance, peer editing, and homework.

·         Approximately 800 points possible. (This is subject to change based on the needs of the class.)

A= 90-100%
B=80-89%
C=70-79%
D=60-69%
F=0-59%

Plagiarism: Plagiarism is the process of borrowing information from other sources or individuals without giving credit. Plagiarism will not be tolerated. Essays will not be accepted unless accompanied by pre-writing exercises, notes, drafts, peer and self-editing marks, etc. This paper trail is proof of a student’s own work. Proof of plagiarism will result in a zero for the assignment.

Classroom Misconduct: Students must read the “Code of Student Conduct” in the new Student Handbook for an understanding of what will be expected within the academic setting.

 

2.3.11 Academic Misconduct

  1. Definitions
    1. Academic Misconduct - includes misconduct associated with the classroom, laboratory or clinical learning process. Examples of academic misconduct include, but are not limited to, cheating, plagiarism, excessive absences, use of abusive or profane language, and disruptive and/or threatening behavior.
    2. Cheating - includes, but is not limited to, (a) use of any unauthorized assistance in taking quizzes, tests, assessment tests or examinations; (b) dependence upon the aid of sources beyond those authorized by the faculty member in writing papers, preparing reports, solving problems, or carrying out other assignments; or (c) the acquisition, without permission, of tests or other academic material belonging to a member of the college faculty or staff.
    3. Plagiarism - includes, but is not limited to, the use of paraphrase or direct quotation of the published or unpublished work of another person without full and clear acknowledgment. It also includes the unacknowledged use of materials prepared by another person or agency engaged in the selling of term papers or other academic materials. Information gathered from the internet and not properly identified is also considered plagiarism.

Final Thoughts: This course is designed to help you become a better writer, researcher, and reader. You will get out of the course what you put into it. You are expected to actively participate in readings, discussions, debates, and reports. Come to class prepared with readings and with required writings and notes. Conduct thorough research. At all times, give credit to the source of information by using proper documentation. Be on time. Be positive. Ask questions. Contribute your thoughts. Be tolerant of others and of ideas that differ from your own.

You need to earn a final grade of “C” or higher to move to ENG 101.

FYI: You MUST physically attend class on the day of the exam in order to pass the course.