Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Exam Day


 1. Complete the "sentence correction" sheet. Hand it in to me.

2. Here are the instructions for the essay. Post your final copy in CANVAS. Hand the draft and peer editing notes to me.

Write the introduction. Capture the attention of the reader. Set your requirements for a good spot to study. Consider describing your favorite place if it is not one of the three here on campus.  Quote experts as support your requirements. Keep in mind that the experts do not have to agree with you. You can quote an expert and then disagree.
  •  Describe all three "good" spots to study on campus, but make sure it is clear that one is the best.
  • Consider listing them in order of importance - good, better, best.  Save the best for last. If you feel that one or two places are equally good, that is OK. Just be sure to provide specific examples to explain why.

  • Write an amazing conclusion. Consider referencing a quotation from one of the quotation sites to add interest to the end.

  • Provide the Works Cited page. Use in-text citations when you quote your classmates or the experts. MLA formatting is required. 
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  •  Your exam must be posted by 2:50 pm today! You must be physically present in class to participate in the exam.
  • Thursday, December 5, 2013

    December 5, 2013

    Reminder: Our exam is next Tuesday in our regular classroom. You have from 1:00-2:50 pm to complete the exam. You must be physically present.

    1. You need to have a paper copy of your Three Best Places to Study draft. Print away!

    Here were the instructions for the essay.

    Write the introduction. Capture the attention of the reader. Set your requirements for a good spot to study. Consider describing your favorite place if it is not one of the three here on campus.  Quote experts as support your requirements. Keep in mind that the experts do not have to agree with you. You can quote an expert and then disagree.
  •  Describe all three "good" spots to study on campus, but make sure it is clear that one is the best.
  • Consider listing them in order of importance - good, better, best.  Save the best for last. If you feel that one or two places are equally good, that is OK. Just be sure to provide specific examples to explain why.

  • Write an amazing conclusion. Consider referencing a quotation from one of the quotation sites to add interest to the end.

  • Provide the Works Cited page. Use in-text citations when you quote your classmates or the experts. MLA formatting is required.
  • 2. Your paper will be edited by four readers. Readers 1, 2, and 3 will comment on the peer editing sheet. Reader 4 will look at each sentence and make sure that it
    • is a complete sentence.
    • contains no punctuation errors.
    • makes sense.
    • uses vivid vocabulary.
    3. You must submit the peer editing sheet along with the draft on Tuesday. Use the information to make corrections.
    4. Exam notes:
    • You have the entire class time on Tuesday to use for the exam.
    • About 30 minutes of the time will be used to complete a GUM test. Know how to
      • Avoid run-on sentences
      • Avoid fragments
      • Punctuate dialogue
      • Use commas correctly
      • Stick to one point of view
    • http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quiz_list.htm  80 81, 82, 83 (commas)
    • 111, 112, 113 - Sentence combining
    • 116 - rewriting bloated sentences
    • Class activity - expanding sentences and avoiding clichés


    Tuesday, December 3, 2013

    Class Work

    Last Tuesday, you looked up what the experts said about creating a positive environment to study.

    Today we will continue with the next steps. This is in preparation for the writing part of the exam. The exam is one week from today! You must be present on the day of the exam. This is EMCC policy.

    What is your favorite place to study? Jot down a brief description of the spot. Where is it? What is there? Is technology important? What about background noise? How about music? What do you need to successfully study?
    Step 1: Talk to the others at your table and see what they do to create a study space. Add any appropriate comments to your notes. Give credit to the speakers. (Did you do this? Let's share to review.)
     
    Step 2: Conduct research. Find out what the experts say about the perfect place to study. Read at least two articles and note 7-10 "things" that must be present in the perfect study spot. Keep track of your sources. Be sure you know the specific source of the information. For example, one source might note that a quiet environment is best because . . . Give credit to that source.
    (Together, as a class, we will create a list of the top 7-10 necessities for successful study spots. Please take out your notes from last Tuesday.)

    Step 3: Create a Works Cited page in EasyBib or other citation spot. Have you started yet?

    New activity:  Step 4: For 15 minutes, walk around campus and look for three study spots. Take notes. What attracts students to that spot? What do you see and hear? What technology is present? How visible or private is the place? Take a picture with your phone so that you can study the spot later.
    Step 5: Return to class and discuss the best place or places on campus to study.

    Here are the instructions for the essay.
    • Write the introduction. Capture the attention of the reader. Set your requirements for a good spot to study. Consider describing your favorite place if it is not one of the three here on campus.  Quote experts as support your requirements. Keep in mind that the experts do not have to agree with you. You can quote an expert and then disagree.
    •  Describe all three "good" spots to study on campus, but make sure it is clear that one is the best.
    • Consider listing thim in order of importance - good, better, best.  Save the best for last. If you feel that one or two places are equally good, that is OK. Just be sure to provide specific examples to explain why.
    • Write an amazing conclusion. Consider referencing a quotation from one of the quotation sites to add interest to the end.
    • Provide the Works Cited page. Use in-text citations when you quote your classmates or the experts. MLA formatting is required.

    Step 6: Bring a paper copy of your draft to class on Thursday. There will be a peer editing activity.
     
    Our exam is next Tuesday from 1-2:50 pm in our regular classroom. COME!