Class Work

1. We will be peer editing. Make sure you have a paper copy of your technology essay. Print now if you have not already sone so.

Before we peer edit, let's review:

Avoiding comma splices:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm

Tips to avoid run-on sentences:
http://www.myenglishteacher.net/runonsentences.html

http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/fragments-and-run-ons/
http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/run-on-sentences.aspx

Remember the FANBOYS!
For
And
Nor
But
Or
Yet
So

Remember the conjunctive adverbs...snob words.
http://www.engl.niu.edu/wac/conjadv.html

Repairing run-on sentences:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quizzes/runons_quiz.htm

Worksheet...(handout. Please sent me an e-mail if you are not here today. I will send you this activity as an attachment.

Now, let's edit your essays. You will have three readers. Listen for instructions.

Homework

Revise your essay. Post the final copy in MyCompLab. It is due before class on Tuesday. It is worth 100 points.