November 19. 2013 - Tuesday

Class Work

This was the homework:

This is homework. Write at least two paragraphs that explain the causes of the problem. Post in Canvas by Tuesday. List your sources. (20 pts)

• Print a copy of your two paragraphs.
• Write your thesis statement on the top along with your name.

Let's look at your sentences. Number your sentences.
Now, use the chart to complete the task.

• How many words are in each sentence?
• How do you begin each sentence?
• What changes should be made?

Let's get rid of extra words!

See: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm

Let's also avoid cliches!

Try the practice quizzes. You will be assigned a number. Correct that sentence for each set. You may be working with a partner.

Write your corrected sentences on the board.

Homework

Write at least two paragraphs that explain the effects of your problem. Give credit to your sources. Bring a paper copy of your paragraphs to class. Also, post in Canvas. Due November 21st. (20 pts.)