Thursday, September 12, 2013

Class Work

  1. You need either a paper copy of your process essay or you need to have a Word document copy showing on the computer screen.
  2. Take the paper rubric and sign your name at the top as the author.
  3. Find someone in the room who is NOT at your table to read for Content. You will read that person's paper for content. Make comments. Highlight if necessary.
  4. Find another reader who is not at your table. Ask that person to read for Clarity. You will read that person's essay for Clarity. Highlight as needed and make comments.
  5. Find a third person who is not at your table and ask that person to read for Mechanics Issues. You will read that person's paper for GUM issues. Highlight as needed and make comments.

Take your rubric and essay and return to your seat. Use the comments to make revisions as you write the final copy. The final copy is due in Canvas before class on Tuesday. You will hand in the Writing Rubric on Tuesday.

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Activity #2
 Back to MyWritingLab one more time.

After consulting with Mr. Robinson,  the company representative, he thought we should try the following:

1. Register for a different section for this class.
 Use:  eaton04717
Enter your student code when asked to do so.

Keep your fingers crossed!

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Activity #3

Comparing and contrasting two ______________________________.

Let's brainstorm a bit. What two things, places, events, or people can be compared and contrasted?

How does one go about organizing all of that information?

Point by Point
or
Item by Item
Take notes!
 Here are some sample essays.
For homework, read the entire "Hazelnut" essay by clicking on the link. Look for words and phrases that clearly show which hazelnut the author prefers.  Be ready to discuss in class on Tuesday.

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/comparison.htm

In class, we will look at three sample essays.
"Shopping in America"
"Neat People vs. Sloppy People"

Note how the author organizes. Also note how the author clearly shares his or her preference for one topic over another.

For homework - Find two "somethings" to compare and contrast. Conduct research. Talk to people and look on the Internet. (Give credit to your sources.) Write a summary paragraph about each topic. Clearly show which you prefer. Just describe each for now. Also, credit your sources.

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